do
burn
her with
the lit
candle
or
smash
my
head
with the
candlestick
that
proudly
embraces it.
instead,why
not
kill two
birds with
one
stone
12 comments:
@rhea: :) thanks!
Ufff!!
@RoGue - hmm?
and how?
@yogesh - and how what exactly? :)
interesting :) looking fwd to more such stuff :)
@niharika - thanks. will keep them coming, hopefully.
Hmm.. that was just a random thought that struck me after reading the verse, the thought with which it ends. The answer is not important really :-)
Remarkable! Interesting idea.
@amiya - you've got to check out the works of Robert Lax. you cannot not fall in love with him.
the poem makes no sense to a novice poet like myself but the concept is amazing! look forward to reading more attempts.
@anonymous: even if the words don't work, the form is called shape poetry - just in case you're be interested. thanks!
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