Tuesday, April 17, 2007

Pebbles...

There it lay, exactly there.

Completely still,

no sign of movement even.

Trampled upon by people,

kids and adults alike.

There it lay,

bearing it all,

getting pressed deeper into the rain soaked ground.

Looking at it I wondered,

was it the heavy rain of last night

that had carried it along.

Or was it the work of one of those bratty li’l kids

who had mischievously thrown it over the fence.

Was it was just my mood

making my mind wander into a puerile direction.

Or was it just another one of those routine things

that I had failed to notice before.

With each careless step

it moved in deeper and deeper.

Pushing its way through the soil

to find a place for itself in the ground

………

As I got up to leave after a few hours,

it wasn’t there where it was, was gone.

All that was left in place

was its mark on the ground.

Looking at it I wondered,

was it the wicked gardener’s eye

that had caught the pebble.

Or was it the discomfort of the pebble itself

That had made him leave for the place it deserved.

13 comments:

Medhavi said...

Its definitely not TRASH! If anything, dyu think the Pebble cd b a metaphor fer smthings in life...?...or m i readin too mch into d lines?

Sahil Chopra said...

@ tweety- well it cn abt anything... wateva u want it to b... :-)

Anonymous said...

Amazing!

I leave it at that..Quite allegorical ain't it ?

Shreya said...

maybe sum things shud just never be taken for granted....

Sahil Chopra said...

@ shreya- hmmm u know how to say wat u want to without really sayin it straight up...nice...got it...hehe... :-)

Moitreyee said...

hmmm followin medhavi.. first instinct ws to read between d lines... bt well... good...
small is nt insignificant..... nice!!

Sahil Chopra said...

@ moitreyee - ufff....duh, you are...as i sed it cn be anythin...wateva you want it to be....

kanika said...

errrmm... so who took the pebble in d end? u sure it was just sunk in mud?? *scratches head*

Sahil Chopra said...

@ kanika...no i couldn't find it there...

That Girl said...

Hm. Again, makes you think.

Or was it the discomfort of the pebble itself That had made him leave for the place it deserved
... Nice.

Medhavi said...

temme...in case it WAS the discomfort, why didn't the pebble face it??

Sahil Chopra said...

@ medhavi- what did u expect?? t'was only a pebble after all...

Mavron said...

may be it 'deserved' a place better...