Wednesday, April 25, 2007

from the old stable...

Entrapped!! In an illusionary world,
she moaned - incessantly - as years unfurled,
hopelessness, desperation, pessimism galore,
a veil of darkness the sky wore…
……
Condemned!! Her demeanor, by one and all,
she begged - for mercy - an overhaul,
pleading, beseeching from door to door,
a position given, of no less than a whore….
……
A spell of ecstasy tranquilized her mind,
she rose- that day- with a hope to rise,
overcoming the lassitude, sanguinity at fore,
she rowed his rickety boat to the shore…..
An unchained melody filled her ears,
she rose- that day- transcending her fears,
breaking the shackles, bearing the pain,
life for her would never b the same….

7 comments:

kanika said...

hmmm..sometimes..ya know chimpu ..sometimes yer stuff conjures up images dat can persist fer a very long tym in one's mind..

Sahil Chopra said...

@ kanika- errmmm....uhhh...ohhkkk..

Medhavi said...

i agree wid kanika! ur gettin better dude...and why is the world tawkin abt hopelessness? Is it jus my Modernism ppr or r u inspired by Beckett n the Absurdists?

Self-deprived said...
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Anonymous said...

Is it a sort of liberation you're talking about, a kind of breaking shackles thing..it's like pattern of what you are writing..even in the previous one you move from darkness slavery...to light freedom and liberation...

PS. This maybe completely OFF the mark! ...don't mind :P

Sahil Chopra said...

@ dhruv...na its not..got yer point, i did...

Mavron said...

appears to me like snatches...lil bits of whole sagas...n d story is quite likely..only i doan knw if its dat simple.

P.S: im working on ur blog..after coll dis is good fun.just like classes trying to unearth d author's vision. :P