he ran his hand
over the moist piece of cloth
dressing the cot
as his fingers read
every movement of hers
through the uncanny contours
of the spread
feeling the dents
of her body pressing deeper
with each subsequent thrust
breeding contempt
for she came cheap
had he been there
he would have laughed
3 comments:
A very interesting post... and I don't think I have really understood the subtle nuances.. but the concept is what baffles me.
Good work :)
@yogesh - great to hear that.
thanks. would love to hear from you on others you like/hate as well. :)
Never thought I would enjoy poetry.. but your getting me addicted with your imagery..
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